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Shots Fired

by rgangsta Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:38 am

Bang! I kinda half-assed this one 'cause I didn't feel like Photoshopping anymore. It's still cool, though. :P

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Re: Shots Fired

by Vandheer Lorde II Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:21 am

Your Character design needs work (Proportion, Hands etc) But you do all the Wrinkle's in the Shirt and Pants awesome, not to mention the Shading and Colour, I'm the complete opposite, I do (In my opinion) Very good Design, but my Shading and Wrinkles are always either 1. not there or 2. crappy lol
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Re: Shots Fired

by ravecchia Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:03 am

i usually don't do shading... i draw my char how i want they are... i like them, it's ok! and this one is cool, yes a bit wrong proportion, but i use "chibi chars" style, so it is good for me^^
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Re: Shots Fired

by rgangsta Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:39 pm

Alright, guys. Thanks for the headsup. I'll try to add more proportion. :P
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Re: Shots Fired

by Vandheer Lorde II Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:59 am

rgangsta wrote:Alright, guys. Thanks for the headsup. I'll try to add more proportion. :P


And I'm sure you'll nail it^^
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Re: Shots Fired

by rgangsta Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:08 pm

I just realized why you guys think it's disproportionate. The legs of the guy is behind him. He's in the air and his legs are bent behind. :D
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Re: Shots Fired

by ravecchia Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:14 pm

rgangsta wrote:I just realized why you guys think it's disproportionate. The legs of the guy is behind him. He's in the air and his legs are bent behind. :D

nop, i don't say it is disproportionate... just the hand are a little small (a normal hand can cover all the face) and the hand that hold the katana...

uhm... for the legs there are some prospective problems... but ehi! i'm not a teacher or a critic! anyone can draw how he like!
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Re: Shots Fired

by rgangsta Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:54 pm

It does need some work. Maybe the legs a bit widened and the hands don't seem too small to me, but I'll try to make them look bigger. ;)
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